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What is this joke; this place; this excuse for love?
A meager caption to illustrate the workings of fate
Hiding nothing with an aesthetically pleasing glove
"He has a plan for everyone. Have faith." you state

The more I look the less I believe; I see only hate
Full of Dionysus, they betray my innocence
The satyrs lustily pounce to taint our trust in fate  
I now find only the cynic's cold impenitence

Flinging propaganda at those who're relatively infants
But they're unable to blindly believe the piercing faces
Denying open-ended prattle from white-garbed militants
Needing unfaltering certainty leaves them faithless

Inquisition meets the somber absence of truth
The asking eyes of the children have yet to learn
Seeking reason is the painful ignorance of youth
What is and isn't allowed; they can't discern

Then you fall too and the ambiguity grabs you
I scream as I watch all succumb to faith or death
The grip chokes; you see that you were them too
If I stay with you, you might keep your breath

As if behind glass, you scream and plead, mute
I can't stand to watch you slice your body open
I slam myself against the glass; refusing refute
Yet I'm forced to watch, your skin and blade woven

The box cutter reaches into my stomach, cutting all
This purge reaches inside my skin and burns deep
The last thing I had is gone and I'm about to fall
The scourge will grab me if my mind won't keep

You aren't here anymore; you rotted long ago
Living is sub par now, though I can't stop here
All I have is my thoughts; even those haunt me so
If I don't move I may decay like you, I fear
©2007-2009 ~THCA
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:iconkasiasdragon:
Then you fall too and the ambiguity grabs you
I scream as I watch all succumb to faith or death
The grip chokes; you see that you were them too
If I stay with you, you might keep your breath

That's my favorite part. Especially the first line, though I couldn't really tell you why. Just that it's particularly appealing to my more shadowed likings.

I personally believe in God, but I don't believe in fate. Predestination is a joke. But that's just me. I'm not saying believe, and I'm not going to shove my beliefs in your face or hands. Just a little tidbit.

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me: Wooo! I'm gonna get hooked up to a bunch of wires and machines. I'll be the bionic woman!

~THCA If they give you electrolytes you'll be the ionic woman too!
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I liked that group also. It's really the culmination of the whole poem. I like the first line also.

As far as God goes... I just sort of throw religion like a sock in the corner until I'm ready to think about it.

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Kasiasdragon: Stuffstuffstuffheartheartheartgorestuffblahblahblahsubliminalmessagingblahblahstuff.
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That's kinda how you have to do it, unfortunately. Because if anyone tries to force it on you, you'll get fed up just as quickly as if you were to think about it too hard and too often. Then it becomes moot, because by then you're just frustrated and about the last thing in the world you want to do is have any sort of faith in anything. *nods* Take your time to sort out your emotions and opinions. If you need any Christianly insite, I'm here for you. ^^

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me: Wooo! I'm gonna get hooked up to a bunch of wires and machines. I'll be the bionic woman!

~THCA If they give you electrolytes you'll be the ionic woman too!
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I really appreciate that. Really.

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Kasiasdragon: Stuffstuffstuffheartheartheartgorestuffblahblahblahsubliminalmessagingblahblahstuff.
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wow.. i love all the religious aspects, political mentions... very strong in this poem to bring out wht u mean... amazing!

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XxLazzuraxX
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Thanks... we all have our shining moments.

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Kasiasdragon: Stuffstuffstuffheartheartheartgorestuffblahblahblahsubliminalmessagingblahblahstuff.
:iconladystarrgazer:
Beautifully written absolutely captivating my hats off to you, for that is one of the best i have read.
*bows*

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~Lycaonia Soyala~ Neice to Imoen Stargazer Member of Wolfspirits. RIP Jon Grim And Imoen Stargazer
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*laughs* Well, I'm both flattered and thankful that you think so. Glad you like it. When I read it, though, it seems too busy. It appears to me as though it's trying to flash everyone with all these words. I don't know. I try to look at things from other's perspective hence my opinion, but if you think it's good, yay for me. Thanks for the comment.

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Kasiasdragon: Stuffstuffstuffheartheartheartgorestuffblahblahblahsubliminalmessagingblahblahstuff.

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